You have clearly put a lot of work into this and you have researched certain details well. I have warded a pass for U2: GC1, GC2 & GC4 and you obtained a merit for the pitch (GC5).
To bring the others up to a merit: - add a reference list and quotes from the ASA and Ofcom - check your spelling (quite a few errors in here) - check that all text fits on one slide (in one frame).
Duncan,
ReplyDeleteYou have clearly put a lot of work into this and you have researched certain details well. I have warded a pass for U2: GC1, GC2 & GC4 and you obtained a merit for the pitch (GC5).
To bring the others up to a merit:
- add a reference list and quotes from the ASA and Ofcom
- check your spelling (quite a few errors in here)
- check that all text fits on one slide (in one frame).
Great start,
EllieB
Good improvements bring this to a merit.
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